Captain America: civil war
Tony burst into the office where Ross is having a meeting.
Tony: write me in for an appointment, Ross! We gotta talk!
Ross: stark?
Tony turns to the other people.
Tony: get out.
Everyone leaves.
Ross: Tony stark, you know, you’re breaking a lot of laws right now.
Tony: stuff it in your mustache, ross, your not Mr law and order yourself.
Ross: what are you talking about?
Tony: what am I talking about?! How about the fact that your cheap hulk knockoff trashed my home, nearly killed my best friend and kidnapped my teammates?! How’s that for law and order?!
Ross: but you see, I haven’t broken any laws, unlike you.
Tony: what?! What are you talking about?!
Ross explains everything. Tony stares in disbelief. Tony: and you say I’m the one breaking laws?! You’re the one wiping your ass with the Geneva Conventions!
Ross: it’s all in the accords.
Tony: what are you talking about?! I wrote it myself! I never put anything about legal kidnappings in there!
Ross gives him the “redrafted” accords.
Tony reads it. This was insane. This was a how to list on superhuman slavery. (Steve, you were right) Tony: There’s, there’s aren't my words! I never wrote this! Ross: exactly, you should stick to making weapons, stark.
Tony: how did you possibly get the u.n. to go along with this?!
Ross: fear can do a lot of things, as you of all people should know, and then there was you, everyone loves Tony stark, everyone loves iron man. Tony’s eyes widen in horror.
Tony: you used me.
Ross: I wouldn’t say used, exactly, more like mutually beneficial. I get the means to protect the nation and you get to go back to your perfect retirement.
Tony grabs Ross and points his repulser at his face. Tony: you got three seconds to say where my team is and give me back my stuff, or else I paint this room with your brains.
Ross: go ahead, that will turn out real well. Tony backs off.
Ross starts fanatically talking about what they can do with all of Tony’s tech and plans and “protect” the county. Tony looked horrified. (Never again) 2008 flashes though his mind.
Tony grabs Ross and lifts him several stories in the air.
Tony: that’s it! I’m done with your bloodlust, your mind games, your manufactured evil! It’s over, done, I’m ending your little war, Ross!
Tony drops Ross, but before he can become street pizza, Tony catches and drops him before leaving. He’s not gonna lie, that felt really good.
Ross: you have no idea how wrong you are, iron man. The war is only beginning.
Back at his mansion, Tony is taking out his anger in his lab.
Tony: why is it whenever I try to do the right thing, it turns into… gahhhh!
Happy: you done taking your anger out on whatever that poor thing was?
Tony: it was supposed to be the Armor’s guidance system.
Pepper: so, why are you hitting it like it insulted your mother?
Tony: because this is all my fault! He throws the Wrench across the lab.
Tony: I shoulda known Ross would pull something like this, should have known Ross would alter the accords behind my back, he framed me in front of my own teammates! Oh god, is that why Steve was so upset? Do they actually think of me like that?! Do they really think I would try to take away their rights?
Pepper: Tony…
Tony: no! They were right! I did sign away their rights, I imprisoned them in their own home! I spilt up the team so I could be Ross’s “good boy”! Happy: boss…
Tony: i was so convinced I was right I didn’t see myself becoming wrong! Now rhodey’s in the er, my friends are in a black site in the middle of the ocean, the compound’s modern art and Ross has my everything! This is 2013 all over again! The Mandarin! extremis! Killian! Even worse, it’s like just Obie! How did I not see it?! It’s almost identical! Obie wanted to start wars to make money, Ross wants to enslave countries and call it protection!
Pepper: Friday.
Friday shocks tony.
Tony: ow! Okay, okay, stop it with the shock protocol, there are better ways to snap me of it.
Tony: what do I do?
Rhodey: first, you stop feeing sorry for yourself.
Friday patches in Rhodey’s voice from the hospital.
Tony: Rhodey, you’re awake?! You’re alive!
Rhodey: you know me, takes more then an ugly fish with muscles to put me down for good. Friday brought me up to speed.
Tony: Rhodey, I am so, so sorry, I…
Rhodey: it’s not your fault, just promise me one thing.
Tony: what?
Rhodey: give Ross and Blonsky a few good hits for me.
Tony: you got it.
Tony: write me in for an appointment, Ross! We gotta talk!
Ross: stark?
Tony turns to the other people.
Tony: get out.
Everyone leaves.
Ross: Tony stark, you know, you’re breaking a lot of laws right now.
Tony: stuff it in your mustache, ross, your not Mr law and order yourself.
Ross: what are you talking about?
Tony: what am I talking about?! How about the fact that your cheap hulk knockoff trashed my home, nearly killed my best friend and kidnapped my teammates?! How’s that for law and order?!
Ross: but you see, I haven’t broken any laws, unlike you.
Tony: what?! What are you talking about?!
Ross explains everything. Tony stares in disbelief. Tony: and you say I’m the one breaking laws?! You’re the one wiping your ass with the Geneva Conventions!
Ross: it’s all in the accords.
Tony: what are you talking about?! I wrote it myself! I never put anything about legal kidnappings in there!
Ross gives him the “redrafted” accords.
Tony reads it. This was insane. This was a how to list on superhuman slavery. (Steve, you were right) Tony: There’s, there’s aren't my words! I never wrote this! Ross: exactly, you should stick to making weapons, stark.
Tony: how did you possibly get the u.n. to go along with this?!
Ross: fear can do a lot of things, as you of all people should know, and then there was you, everyone loves Tony stark, everyone loves iron man. Tony’s eyes widen in horror.
Tony: you used me.
Ross: I wouldn’t say used, exactly, more like mutually beneficial. I get the means to protect the nation and you get to go back to your perfect retirement.
Tony grabs Ross and points his repulser at his face. Tony: you got three seconds to say where my team is and give me back my stuff, or else I paint this room with your brains.
Ross: go ahead, that will turn out real well. Tony backs off.
Ross starts fanatically talking about what they can do with all of Tony’s tech and plans and “protect” the county. Tony looked horrified. (Never again) 2008 flashes though his mind.
Tony grabs Ross and lifts him several stories in the air.
Tony: that’s it! I’m done with your bloodlust, your mind games, your manufactured evil! It’s over, done, I’m ending your little war, Ross!
Tony drops Ross, but before he can become street pizza, Tony catches and drops him before leaving. He’s not gonna lie, that felt really good.
Ross: you have no idea how wrong you are, iron man. The war is only beginning.
Back at his mansion, Tony is taking out his anger in his lab.
Tony: why is it whenever I try to do the right thing, it turns into… gahhhh!
Happy: you done taking your anger out on whatever that poor thing was?
Tony: it was supposed to be the Armor’s guidance system.
Pepper: so, why are you hitting it like it insulted your mother?
Tony: because this is all my fault! He throws the Wrench across the lab.
Tony: I shoulda known Ross would pull something like this, should have known Ross would alter the accords behind my back, he framed me in front of my own teammates! Oh god, is that why Steve was so upset? Do they actually think of me like that?! Do they really think I would try to take away their rights?
Pepper: Tony…
Tony: no! They were right! I did sign away their rights, I imprisoned them in their own home! I spilt up the team so I could be Ross’s “good boy”! Happy: boss…
Tony: i was so convinced I was right I didn’t see myself becoming wrong! Now rhodey’s in the er, my friends are in a black site in the middle of the ocean, the compound’s modern art and Ross has my everything! This is 2013 all over again! The Mandarin! extremis! Killian! Even worse, it’s like just Obie! How did I not see it?! It’s almost identical! Obie wanted to start wars to make money, Ross wants to enslave countries and call it protection!
Pepper: Friday.
Friday shocks tony.
Tony: ow! Okay, okay, stop it with the shock protocol, there are better ways to snap me of it.
Tony: what do I do?
Rhodey: first, you stop feeing sorry for yourself.
Friday patches in Rhodey’s voice from the hospital.
Tony: Rhodey, you’re awake?! You’re alive!
Rhodey: you know me, takes more then an ugly fish with muscles to put me down for good. Friday brought me up to speed.
Tony: Rhodey, I am so, so sorry, I…
Rhodey: it’s not your fault, just promise me one thing.
Tony: what?
Rhodey: give Ross and Blonsky a few good hits for me.
Tony: you got it.
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