Marvel, Please do anything and have something similar as this scene

Spoilers for: Thor Love and Thunder, Deadpool and Wolverine, and Loki tv Show

After the X-men and Avengers learn they are fighting for the same cause and stop fighting each other, they team up. But that is nothing but an inconvenience to Dr. Dooms plan. Dr. Doom starts destroying all the Avengers, X-Men, and The F4 Universe and as they escape into more and more universes through Mr. Fantastic's device, the omnicide continues.

Soon, the TVA appear.

Mobius: The Multiverse is in danger and you guys are essential to save us. But we must safe you first. The TVA is safe, for now.

Thor (presumed leader): Our worlds have been destroyed, we want the end of this Doom.

They enter the portals and land in the TVA Headquarters.

Mobius: Your world haven't been destroyed, only consumed by Doom for a separate dimension he's constructing. It can be retrieved.

Thor: How?

Deadpool and Wolverine have also appeared already safe here.

Deadpool(All serious): Existence will cease if we aren't able to stop him.

Mobius: We need a break to Dr. Doom's powerful hex field... I know you are smart, you might be able to help?

Mr. Fantastic: Show me what you got.

After sometime Mr. Fantastic and Mobius come out both looking stumped.

Wolverine: Well, that leaves only one option.

Mobius: We don't know if it's safe though.

Thor: Anything to safe the multiverse, I'm willing to sacrifice my life for my daughter!

Mobius (wholesome smile under his mustache): The god at the center of time, he knows all the answers.

Thor: Who is this god.

Mobius: Loki...

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ybtlamlliw2026-01-20 06:20

Every day I'm glad normal people don't write for Marvel.

Ok_Trade_45492026-01-20 06:23

Haha, yeah. Obviously I pulled this out in 20 mins and am nothing of a professional writer. I'm an freaking high schooler.

But I want a scene similar to this ending with Thor being in shock about Loki being the god of stories and then them meeting.

Gilded-Mongoose2026-01-20 06:36

Good shit, and don't give up on the creative ideas and writing.

It was a solid idea to reuse Wanda's Hex concept and apply it to the magic that Doctor Doom is capable of - it's the same shit that I hope to see since seeing Strange, Wanda, and Ironheart's use of magic. Transposing what we've seen into what Doom is capable of.

It's also a great (if a little succinct) way to get us back to the Thor-Loki connection, and to do so in something that's anywhere even close to the level of epic emotional payoff that we want and deserve from the two.

Good start so far and keep at it.

(*For context, I'm a 34 year old writer, who got inspired into Mechanical Engineering for college by Ironman when it came out my junior year of high school*)

Ok_Trade_45492026-01-20 06:51

Lol Iron man came out before I was born. But I'm inspired to take physics in college for many reasons, but mainly MCU and Interstellar.

Also, thank you for this comment, because it inspires me a lot to know that someone out there is proud of me. Though I won't write and continue this as I will let the talented writers at Marvel studios up at it, and I also much prefer write my own original stories rather than fan fiction.

I have been planning this story which I feel like could be world changing in the range of Sci-fi, if done right, but it is inspired by the Dune book and it is about a dimensional-faring human race facing looming danger by an even more powerful alien race, but I'm not sure what yet.

Gilded-Mongoose2026-01-20 07:01

>Though I won't write and continue this as I will let the talented writers at Marvel studios up at it, and I also much prefer write my own original stories rather than fan fiction.

That's what I do, in some parts. I've found that the creative ideas and development that I work on work so much better in their own new world, almost as a love story to the original premises, than an attempted fan fiction to the original work on its own. It's just a spark - it doesn't need to fan the same flames.

This is also what Zack Snyder did with Rebel Moon, to what he wanted his Star Wars project to be. He's not the best example, but he's a great one for how adjacent concepts can manifest and work out.

And yeah...I've dealt with a lot of people who were born before my formative years. It's wild but, also wildly, getting used to that is a strange milestone of this phase in life. I had my first shock learning that some college students I was mentoring were born after 9/11. Oh lord. For you that'll be like learning in many more years that someone you're interacting with was born after, say, January 6th. It's just an absurd time marker.

richard-5642026-01-23 16:57

That makes me feel old lol, I saw it in theatres when I was finishing up college. But don't let people on this sub discourage you, you have cool ideas. Keep up the creativity.

Ok_Trade_45492026-01-24 06:39

Thanks Buddy

CaptHayfever2026-01-20 15:55

Ya know what? Upvoted for healthy self-awareness. :)

Ok_Trade_45492026-01-21 00:54

Yeah, I have a clear idea of what I wrote sucked, I just wanted a basic premise of Thor and Loki meeting and Thor being surprised and proud at the same time.

CrumptownCrips2026-01-20 06:24

And then everybody clapped.

hell20_2026-01-20 06:25

>Omnicide

Say that again

Gilded-Mongoose2026-01-20 06:28

A little rough in the writing there, but it's a cool optional premise!

Ok_Trade_45492026-01-20 06:33

Yeah, I just want the surprise at the end for sure, but I pulled this out in like 20 mins, the writing would've been on a much higher standard if I had forsay, a day to write it.

Gilded-Mongoose2026-01-20 06:38

For sure. This is just Reddit after all.

Sometimes I get started on comments - even just responses to other people - and sometimes I either get an idea, or I get into writing so much, that I have to move it to a Google Doc to develop it further. Sometimes it's too good to post on Reddit alone, and sometimes the idea is great but it's only so perfunctory that it stays on Reddit as a raw, 20-minute idea.

Real ones will see the vision and the concepts and appreciate it for what it is - if I do say so myself.

Ok_Trade_45492026-01-20 06:44

Thank you bro, I do write (or used to) in my free time. Though I'm still a high schooler and have a lot of improvements to do, I do aspire to become an author of some sort in the future, maybe even in film.

Gilded-Mongoose2026-01-20 06:49

I think as you are, you're on track for film, or script writing.

You seem to focus on ideas, concepts, and direction. Novel writing will be a little different. I'd like to recommend that you pick up a screenwriting book - any start pack type - and reach out to any film/screenwriting school associates that you can find and try to connect with them.

You have the creativity and concepts of premises, but also have a lot of room for true expanded and more thorough structural growth.

StewiesCurbside2026-01-20 06:44

Same people who shit on marvel writing btw

Ok_Trade_45492026-01-20 06:58

Oh, I never really hated on the writing itself. This is due to each writer having their own creative thought process and each idea is good in their own terms.

I've only disliked directors when they are not able to fix up this writing and improve upon to make a good movie. E.g. The ants evolving for years and defeating Kang was a pretty cool idea for the writer who wrote it because it seems really intriguing when it is just a standalone movie. But it was the directors fault to know that this villain will be a major villain and guide the writers away from, to not make Kang look weak, and maybe not defeat him at all, more like overcome him.

richard-5642026-01-23 16:59

I didn't have a problem with the ants. They were super advanced over thousands of years, and genetically modified. It was took Scott, Cassie, Hank, Hope, a whole rebel army and MODOK to actually defeat, and even this was a super depowered Kang. He had like 10% of his normal technology. It would be like defeating Thanos if he had both his arms chopped off or something, and no infinity stones.

Ok_Trade_45492026-01-24 06:41

Personally, not me neither. But if I was director, I would’ve definitely removed the scenes, because when you’re making a blockbuster film for a HUGE movie franchise, you don’t just see your own vision, you make sure most of the audience will like it.

Moon_Beans12026-01-20 06:44

Always remember the 'show don't tell rule'. There is limited drama in Thor being told about Loki's current position because this means his reaction is somewhat muted and by the time he meets Loki later he has fully had time to digest the information.

If instead you have that no one is in a position or has the time to tell him then you have a far more powerful scene because Thor will then walk in, encounter Loki and be emotionally unprepared to see his brother again who he thought was long dead. This makes for a more raw and emotional scene and will make the audience feel great catharsis as we have all been waiting to see them meet again since Loki escaped in Endgame almost a decade ago.

Ok_Trade_45492026-01-20 07:01

Yeah, I have a really bad habit of telling and summarizing my stories. It's like the scenario plays out in my brain and I expect the reader to automatically see it.

But I agree, your idea of him seeing Loki again instead of hearing about him would be much better and a cheer worthy moment for the audiences.

Moon_Beans12026-01-20 08:51

I don't think it's a bad thing, plenty of good authors probably have similar ideas that pop into their heads. The key to the craft is to take the cornel of what makes that initial idea interesting to you and to refine and rework it until you have a really strong story.

For instance with the Thor & Loki reunion you have recognised in your initial idea how emotional their crossing paths again would be. So in reworking the idea you might come to a point where you have a scene where they meet each other again in person so that the emotions are at their most potent. But what if you add additional hurdles to make it even more bittersweet? What if rather than sitting the situation out Loki is actively trying to stop Doom's plan whilst Thor is trying to figure out who is causing all the incursions? So when they meet Thor is overjoyed that Loki is alive but because he is unaware of the events of Loki S1&2 he wrongly assumes that Loki is the villain behind all the events of Doomsday. Loki has no time to explain the situation and so he is forced to fight and in the ensuing chaos they both fail in their respective missions and contribute to the eventual victory of Dr Doom leaving them both feeling guilty and personally responsible for all that happens later.

A good percentage of strong writing is just reworking and streamlining ideas to make them better and identifying and correcting weaker elements to initial concepts.

Ok_Trade_45492026-01-20 14:35

Yeah, that's a great storyline, but I don't know how Thor would beat Loki rn. I also feel like after Infinity War, Thor wouldn't think Loki would truly do something like it know that at that point he has truly changed. It's just that this Thor seems MUCH MUCH wiser and not likely to make a decision without much thought.

urgasmic2026-01-20 06:53

i mean im sure there will be a big reveal and such.

Ok_Trade_45492026-01-20 07:03

Yeah, I really hope so. And it should be epic too.

resetxform12026-01-20 11:41

We all have to learn even after we are adults and to keep learning more and more, our lives were not meant to be working, but creating. Some of us are gifted for things, and other have to work harder. In truth even with hard work, we are all not destined to be what we want to be and accept this. Maybe it'd a past life passion that this life is not for.

I have have several book ideas I started, but I technically cant write well, its a craft that needs love and passion for and to constantly needs sunlight, water, and tenderness for it to grow to the best it can be. If this is your need to write and not a want, then study and ask for help.

I wish you the best in your journey!

Ok_Trade_45492026-01-21 00:53

Well I’d consider myself a good novel writer, if I can somehow fix basic faults like show don’t tell and descriptive writing.

But this was a film script which I have nearly no experience with.

resetxform12026-01-22 10:02

Ok.

I had thought of trying a script myself, but I have to much going on at the moment to take on additional work.

Affectionate_Rub_6382026-01-21 13:29