I wrote Avengers Doomsday.
The year is **3025**. Doctor Doom has advanced technological supremacy. His world is protected by an advanced Army of Doom-Boots. and he has mastered time travel. But Suddenly,His reality begins to collapse. His country Latveria, His Family and His all gets crushed and dies because of multiverse collision.
Using his time travel technology, Doom escapes the end of his universe and travels back to **2025** to investigate the origin of the collapse.
In 2025, Doom discovers that multiple variants and groups from different timelines have joined together. He encounters a mysterious council and becomes convinced that **Kang and the Council of Kang's** are responsible for the destruction of his future world. Believing that destroying Kang and his council is the only solution for this, Doom unleashes his Doom Bots against Kang and his armies. The attack fails. Doom is defeated and barely escapes.
Doom finds out that he needs immense strength and allies, He goes to earth 10015 and kidnaps Franklin Richards and plans to use him to defeat Kang Council. He creates clones of himself and Doom seeks out **Loki**, the current keeper of the multiverse timeline.
Doom warns Loki that Kang will eventually destroy the multiverse and must be stopped immediately. Loki, understanding the risk but unable to fully intervene, places a powerful spell on the branching timelines, stabilizing them for a limited period of time.
Loki, Franklin Richards (the son of Reed Richards, previously kidnapped at the end of Fantastic Four), and Dr Doom and his army consisting of Doom-Bots and Clones unite to battle the Council of Kangs. Together, they succeed in destroying them. Loki uses Time slipping and delivers a crucial blow to Kang.
However,
Doom then returns to **3025**, only to find his reality still collapsing. This leads him to a terrifying conclusion: **Loki might be the cause**.
Doom investigates Loki’s past and learns about **Sylvie and the events occurred during Loki Season 1 and 2**. He learns about the TVA and their technology.Doom captures Sylvie and then meets Loki. Doom demands control of the multiverse timeline branches, claiming only he can save reality. Loki refuses.
A brutal battle follows. Doom kills Sylvie.
Emotionally shattered and broken by guilt, Loki loses control.Loki tries to Time slip but Doom has a found way to stop from Loki and sends him to the TVA using TVA Temped. Doom then merge branches violently, forming a single fractured reality known as **Battleworld**. Countless universes are destroyed as collateral damage.
Realising the scale of his mistake, Loki in the TVA. Using TVA technology, he begins recruiting heroes across surviving timelines. Only **Earth-616** and **Earth-838** remain intact.
Loki realises that he needs Avengers and their leader. He travels to the **1940s**, where Steve Rogers and Peggy Carter are living together and have a child. Loki reveals the future to Steve and explains the consequences of his past decisions. Steve agrees to return and is brought into the present timeline.
Previously, Doom attacks **Earth-10015**, the home planet of the Fantastic Four, in order to kidnap Franklin Richards again. The planet is destroyed. The Fantastic Four escape and flee to Earth-616, seeking help.
Now united on Earth-616 are **Loki, Steve Rogers, the Avengers, the Fantastic Four, Spider-Man, and the Thunderbolts**. They prepare for the final war against Doctor Doom and the Army of Doom.
The truth is finally revealed.
Doom’s universe is collapsing because **Steve Rogers and Peggy Carter were never meant to have a child**. That single deviation fractured time at its foundation. On top of that, Doctor Strange’s misuse of dark magic and the multiverse spell cast during *No Way Home* further destabilized reality.
The multiverse is not ending because of Doom or Kang.
It is ending because of the Avengers’ mistakes.
And now, they must pay the price.
There may be many mistakes or some plotholes in this. However, I want feedback on this on what can be added and removed. Thank you for taking your time on reading this ☺️.
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Using his time travel technology, Doom escapes the end of his universe and travels back to **2025** to investigate the origin of the collapse.
In 2025, Doom discovers that multiple variants and groups from different timelines have joined together. He encounters a mysterious council and becomes convinced that **Kang and the Council of Kang's** are responsible for the destruction of his future world. Believing that destroying Kang and his council is the only solution for this, Doom unleashes his Doom Bots against Kang and his armies. The attack fails. Doom is defeated and barely escapes.
Doom finds out that he needs immense strength and allies, He goes to earth 10015 and kidnaps Franklin Richards and plans to use him to defeat Kang Council. He creates clones of himself and Doom seeks out **Loki**, the current keeper of the multiverse timeline.
Doom warns Loki that Kang will eventually destroy the multiverse and must be stopped immediately. Loki, understanding the risk but unable to fully intervene, places a powerful spell on the branching timelines, stabilizing them for a limited period of time.
Loki, Franklin Richards (the son of Reed Richards, previously kidnapped at the end of Fantastic Four), and Dr Doom and his army consisting of Doom-Bots and Clones unite to battle the Council of Kangs. Together, they succeed in destroying them. Loki uses Time slipping and delivers a crucial blow to Kang.
However,
Doom then returns to **3025**, only to find his reality still collapsing. This leads him to a terrifying conclusion: **Loki might be the cause**.
Doom investigates Loki’s past and learns about **Sylvie and the events occurred during Loki Season 1 and 2**. He learns about the TVA and their technology.Doom captures Sylvie and then meets Loki. Doom demands control of the multiverse timeline branches, claiming only he can save reality. Loki refuses.
A brutal battle follows. Doom kills Sylvie.
Emotionally shattered and broken by guilt, Loki loses control.Loki tries to Time slip but Doom has a found way to stop from Loki and sends him to the TVA using TVA Temped. Doom then merge branches violently, forming a single fractured reality known as **Battleworld**. Countless universes are destroyed as collateral damage.
Realising the scale of his mistake, Loki in the TVA. Using TVA technology, he begins recruiting heroes across surviving timelines. Only **Earth-616** and **Earth-838** remain intact.
Loki realises that he needs Avengers and their leader. He travels to the **1940s**, where Steve Rogers and Peggy Carter are living together and have a child. Loki reveals the future to Steve and explains the consequences of his past decisions. Steve agrees to return and is brought into the present timeline.
Previously, Doom attacks **Earth-10015**, the home planet of the Fantastic Four, in order to kidnap Franklin Richards again. The planet is destroyed. The Fantastic Four escape and flee to Earth-616, seeking help.
Now united on Earth-616 are **Loki, Steve Rogers, the Avengers, the Fantastic Four, Spider-Man, and the Thunderbolts**. They prepare for the final war against Doctor Doom and the Army of Doom.
The truth is finally revealed.
Doom’s universe is collapsing because **Steve Rogers and Peggy Carter were never meant to have a child**. That single deviation fractured time at its foundation. On top of that, Doctor Strange’s misuse of dark magic and the multiverse spell cast during *No Way Home* further destabilized reality.
The multiverse is not ending because of Doom or Kang.
It is ending because of the Avengers’ mistakes.
And now, they must pay the price.
There may be many mistakes or some plotholes in this. However, I want feedback on this on what can be added and removed. Thank you for taking your time on reading this ☺️.
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Commentaires
But Suddenly,His reality begins to collapse. His country Latveria, His Family and His all gets crushed and dies because of multiverse collision.
Using his time travel technology, Doom escapes the end of his universe and travels back to **2025** to investigate the origin of the collapse.
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That's actually meant to be Kang's motivations, at least according to Earth's Mightiest Heroes
I hope Sylvie isn't fridged for Loki's sake. The character deserves better than that.
"I'll use this historically, borderline sexist trope because based on nothing but conjecture it might not mean anything in the narrative in the long run"
Dense.
What’s the goal here? This is fan fiction. Do you want people to critique the story? Surely we cannot critique the writing as you had AI make a pass on this already.